In doleful winds, I reminiscence
The chill that seeped and settled in
My flesh and limbs as trembling tips
Brushed against frozen skin.
My blood ran cold as shades of blue
Began to pace across your face
Their icy hues numbed my soul
That day when I held you at my nape.
I could feel the warmth escape as I embraced your tender hands
And kissed your head for one last time.
And I’m afraid I must admit, I’m left behind
In frozen bits, all to myself.
I must confess, there’s no redress
In Summer’s bliss
The zeal of Spring can never bring
Me warm respite.
And to this day the morose sight
Of emerald eyes sends a familiar chill
Down my thawing spine.
My Winter reignites as you resurface.
~ By Tanya~
(The picture is from I Origins – a movie for hearts struggling to find closure. )
As first lines go…WOW!!! Instantly hooked
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Thank you for reading, Darren. I’m glad this got you hooked. 🙂
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Jeez, Tanya, that’s a fantabulous piece!
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Thank you Kunal. 😊
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Wowwww…… Loved this!
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Thank you, PLT. 🙂
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Beautiful words to express such pain. This is amazing.
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Thank you for stopping by, Victory. I’m glad you could feel my words. Take care 🙂
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You’re welcome. 😊
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This was beautiful.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful! I love the flow, Zen!
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Thank you, Jones. I’m glad you did. 🙂
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Love your work, Tanya.
Keep ’em coming.
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Thank you Poem-ed. I’m glad you liked what I put up. 🙂
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Manudev 🙂
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Manudev. Nice. Thank you for stopping by. Appreciate it 🙂
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This was the worst poem I’ve ever read.
Just kidding! I loved it. I just like to be different.
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I’m glad! I’ll be posting stuff that’s even worse. Stay tuned Mister Clever.
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Worse than this? Well… I might swing by, if I’m not busy. 😉
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Thoroughly enjoyed!
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So glad you did. All smiles. 🙂
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You write beautifully! 😊
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I’m so glad you liked this. Thank you for stopping by. 🙂
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I’ll be reading some more in a minute just got a few things to do! 😊
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Yay! I hope you like what you read. Shall visit you soon, good night from this end of the world. 🙂
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I’ve loved it so far! It’s so hard trying to keep up with everyone and I’ve been slack with my reading lately! Sleep well and you will wake up to more notifications of likes and comments from me! 😊
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Oh I can understand, I’m far too lazy to read. And these days, to write as well. This was such a wonderful morning surprise, you really did make my day! I will most certainly go through your feed come night. 😊
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When I’m not reading I’ll write. Or work gets in the way or I’m spending time with my daughters. So as and when I have the time. 😊
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All good, as long as you’re writing. I’m currently jobless and I have to start studying for my exams but I keep delaying it. I blame the blog. 🙂
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Sorry to hear that. Yes it can be difficult not to be distracted! 😉
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