Innocent she seems.
At first.
Insouciant.
Indifferent,
To rejection.
But she smoulders and simmers,
In the shadows of the heart.
Surreptitiously.
Lingering maliciously.
Dreaming of sweet revenge
As she slowly rots inside,
Chafing flesh,
Corrupting tissue.
Corroding.
Eroding.
Her vengeance only grows.
She begins to hound
The soul.
With vicious content
And no remorse.
Sprawling in malignancy.
Basking in spiteful glee.
Waiting
To be resurrected
In cruel anticipation.
~ By Tanya~
Wow! This is so gorgeous, yet so dark! I love how you describe this creature – is she a witch? Some sort of revenant?
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Yes, a revenant of a dream! I feel when you try to kill a cherished dream, it seems insignificant at first, until it comes back to haunt you. I think no one can truly kill their desires/dreams. We learn to suppress and ignore them but that’s something that’s bound to backfire. This was what was on my mind when I began this piece. I’m glad you could sense the darkness I was trying to convey. And thank you 🙂
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It is amazing and so true! You had a killer idea 🙂 As always it is my pleasure to read you 😉
PS:I hope you had a nice time with your family by the way. I am with mine this week end. It feels amazing to be around those you love.
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Oh its wonderful to be back home. I’m being smothered in love, in a good way though. And it feels great to laze around and do nothing. I’m sure you’ll have a great weekend, family love is the best love. Have a wonderful time, I’ll be catching up on everything I missed. Hi to everybody at your end 🙂 😀
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Enjoy the love, darling! I agree with you a hundred percent 🙂 The week end has already started. Will do! Hi back on your end 🙂 A gigantic hug!
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I love this. The first line is perfect. It really grabbed my attention.
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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This is amazing! Your blog is truly amazing. 🙂 Great work!
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I’m so glad you like my work. I ardently follow your posts, they’re so insightful. Your appreciation means a lot. Thank you for reblogging, you made my day. 🙂
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I’m going to do a lot more of this reblogging! Your writing is incredible. It just opened my mind to something I never even imagined. So thank you! 🙂 your poems made my day.
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I’m so glad you could connect to my thoughts. I love dark imagery and poetry. I was beginning to think the blog could use some happy stuff. But you’ve made me change my mind with your kind words. Thank you for all the love 🙂
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It’s not just the dark stuff. All of your posts that I read just now are amazing. Honestly! 🙂
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I couldn’t be happier. I hope my coming posts don’t disappoint. Stay tuned. Have a great weekend 🙂
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You too 🙂
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I couldn’t be more happy now that I know I have a reader like you. 🙂
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The pleasure’s all mine. I’ve got to catch up on my reading for this whole week, can’t wait to raid your feed 🙂
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I hope you like what you see. 🙂
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I’m sure I will 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Obsessive Writer and commented:
The most beautiful yet dark thing I’ve read in a very long time! Please visit their blog for more.
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And this one is so beautifully written! Dark, yet so beautiful! So elegantly you leave a touch of magic in your posts always! Missed your posts ! Great work! 🙂
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Thank you. You’re far too kind. Have you been writing? I have so much to catch up with. I’ve been a useless blob since I’ve reached home 🙂
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Yes I did post some! You can check them! I hope you like what you see! 🙂 Actually I have been kinda busy with my major project in college ! Sadly I don’t get time to write or think of something new ! 😦
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I will definitely. I can understand, been there done that and used to crib a lot back when I was studying. But I miss it. Study hard and have a great week 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 Well, just one more viva to go, and it’s the end of my college life, so it’s tough to force myself to study ! Haha! 😛 😀
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Awesome! Awesome! I love the characterization of these spurned affections. Great job, Tanya!
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Jones Jones Jones! Thank you, I’m glad you do! 😊
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